Infinite Jest, blindly judged APR 11 2011
Someone at Yahoo Answers posted the first page of Infinite Jest with the title "First page of my book. what do you think?" The crowd was not impressed:
No discernible voice/tone in this writing. Rambling descriptions. I, frankly, do not care where each and every person is seated. I don't care what shoe you're wearing. If you take out all the unnecessary details, you'd be left with about seven words.
See also what happens when a photo by Henri Cartier-Bresson gets critiqued on Flickr.
to better show a sense of movement SOMETHING has to be in sharp focus